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Here is an animation of a dog I made.
I used Macromedia Flash MX.

Please tell me what you think of my animation!
http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/6470/...dog8fo.swf

I think the buildings are different than the other things in the movie. Does someone have some tips how I can make better looking buildings?

WOW, really nice animation.

The strides are very smooth in motion, and I am loving the shading on the trees Smile

The buildings could use a little work, but otherwise, A+!! Big Grin
hey man its really nice.
But the motion of dog is quite fast. It would be better if the leafs on tree also moves slightly
I agree, the movement of the dog is smooth and well-developed. As stated previously, the buildings could benefit from a little work to make them more appealing. Perhaps you could also add other random animations, such as a plane infrequently flying across the sky? You should ponder developing cartoons; you definitely have the talent! Smile
Its very nice. I agree that the buildings good use a little work but thats not the idea of this im guessing. The only thing I can say is slow down the dog just a bit.
If only I could do that Wink
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